Poem

[custard~SPARTA~]

Harry (11) wrote this tonight for homework

 

It?s like she controls my mind,

She?s all sweet and kind,

She is always playful,

And she is helpful.

 

She is always jolly,

Like she?s a dolly,

When she?s annoyed you can see it in her eye,

I love it when she cooks steak pie.

 

Her favourite animal is a polar bear,

For then she will always care,

She helps me with my homework,

I hate it when she has to work.

 

She pays me for weekly jobs,

When she cooks it?s usually at the hob,

It?s like she never give up,

And like she?s a pup.

 

She?s like superwomen,

But in form of a normal woman,

It?s like she?s from outer space,

But she doesn?t take up to much space.

[MedicSN6]

just like my wife. Nice.... except the last line

 

(she'll kill me when she reads this. Its been nice knowing ya.)

[Durka-Durka~SPARTA~]

wow custard. looks like you got the making of a real writer on your hands. I'm sure you already do, but make sure you encourage him. I wrote a lot as a kid, but I was pressured into doing other things and couldn't live up to my potential.

 

On a lighter note....if that's a girl he's writing about at 11.....woah man you got some hard times a'comin!

[StevenADunn~SPARTA~]

Very Impresed!

 

Well done Custard Jr!

 

Custard, you have a budding star there Mate, don't let him give that up.

 

Steve

Edited October 4, 2007 by StevenADunn~SPARTA~

[custard~SPARTA~]

Funny thing is it is his sister who is usually good at English, Harry fav subject has allways been math this must be just a freak. He gets a pat on the back for this tho.

[Krambo]

get him a headset sunshine!